This ist he first page of a 14 pp. comic from a Star Wars universe. I intend to color it with acrylics, like Juan Gimenez does.
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I hope that some day I shall do my Vampire comic. This is just a sketch from it. Scripting seems to drag on. No time, I guess... Anyways, be...
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Here is a panel from an old Blueberry episode where Mike and Jim Mac Clure have been taken under custody, followed by fragments from a newer...
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hello.
technically, not bad. you might want to fatten up the gutters a bit, and try using different line weights to convey distance (i.e. panel 3). the storytelling part is ok in the first half, but panels 4-6 get a bit muddy. especially the transition from 5-6. sure, there's no text, but it should be much clearer.
how much pre-planning do you do?
cheers
-tonch
Yes, agreed, Tonci, thank you for dropping a line. I hope inking inconsistencies won't show up so much after I paint over. As per pre-planning, well I wrote the script and did som rough sketches to aid me through setting up the panel layout. Cheers!
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